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chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.

0 posted 2000-02-07 11:54 AM



I was sitting at my computer one day
when my sister said to me
look at this site
it's full of poetry

I wasn't into it
until i got some mail
Some poetry was praised
when i thought it would fail


There's many there
all great poets
You don't have to tell them
they already know it

They are all nice
and they all reply
They are all like mice
scatter everywhere.

I know some of their names
but not all.
There is Marilyn
who seems very nice.

There is Jer
i don't know about him.
There is jerome and like Jer
he's a mystery to me

This doesn't rhyme
and it's not supposed to
it's just a little writing
so u can get to know...

THE TEEN FORUM!!!!!!!!                           

© Copyright 2000 Barbara Mendoza - All Rights Reserved
sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-02-07 11:56 AM


What about Alwye? And me? and Tamma? and poetry_kills? oops..you mentioned him didn't you?  

good poem sis...

Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-02-07 12:24 PM


Well...I think this is a great way to get to know people. Keep writing my friend. Youare doing fine.  
poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
3 posted 2000-02-07 06:44 PM


*waa haa haa* jerome the mysterious priest... i think you just gave me the idea for a new temporary signature *grins*... the poem is good... i have a challenge for you though *grins* (i know, i know.. this isn't the poetry challenge forum, but this is just for chic)... try and do an acrostic of all the people's names in the forum... it doesn't have to rhyme, but i'd like to see you do it... you and your sister could even work together on it... you seem to have a knack for incorporating names into poetry *heh*... just a thought...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge



Mistikman
Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
4 posted 2000-02-07 07:12 PM


OOH! OOH! OOH! Include me please   cool poem  

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
5 posted 2000-02-07 07:17 PM


"Hello! I'm Jer your friendly mouse!" lol.  Wow... so Jerome and I are a mystery. Not the first time we have been told that! Anyway, great poem. I hope to get to know you better so you can write more!

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

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