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Smore
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-02-05 01:30 AM



Open up your heart
And let your feelings show
Open up your heart
Or else this love I'll never know

You keep your feelings locked inside
Therefore mine I also hide
There's so much I want to tell
So these feelings can prevail.



[This message has been edited by Smore (edited 02-06-2000).]

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Mistikman
Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-02-08 06:29 PM


HERE I AM TO SAVE THE DAY!!!!!
Another poem with 0 replies after 2 days, so it is being rescued  

Nice poem, it is short, sweet, and to the point.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Majestic
Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
2 posted 2000-02-08 10:08 PM


it's a bird..it's a plane...hehe..nope, just mistikman..lol..

you only live once...just go for it...hehe..

life is a dream, lest ye dare to live it...

nice poem...btw..

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



First__Knight
Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

3 posted 2000-02-09 05:17 AM


Vivid thoughts.....but don't hide what lives inside...be it feelings or thoughts.  Share it all with the world and it comes back..Maybe not today..maybe not tomorrow..but it will.  Keep that heart open.....so that the space and love can be seen  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.


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