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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-02-03 10:09 AM


What is it about my name
That people find so intriguing?
I mean..it's just my name.

People tell me
"you should do unique things
with a name like that."
And I say..
Why?

Lavada...sounds original
to me...why do people have
to say "Unique" or "Intriguing"?
Why can't it be Lavada?

I was named after my great-grandmother
She died 4 years ago..
Now people say.."you live up to the name"
What if I don't? Will I be denounced
As a family member?

I don't want to be like her...
I want to be like me
Just me...




[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-04-2000).]

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Penelope
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 31

1 posted 2000-02-03 11:42 AM


I really like your poem, I can understand why you might feel this way.  Living up to a name or to the legend of another person is never easy.  I suppose it wouldn't help to say that you do have a lovely name, but it is true.  I look forward to reading more of your work.  

-Penny


 My advice in life is; talk to yourself, you never know what you'll learn.

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
2 posted 2000-02-03 11:52 AM


thanks Penny...i needed that.. it really is hard to live up to someone who did so much in her life...i can't live up to my families expectaions! SHE WENT THROUGH THE DEPRESSION!!! That is pretty awesome..but i could never do that...*sigh*  

~~Lavada~~

p.s. my mom almost named me Jennifer..i almost wished she did

 "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

chic
Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
3 posted 2000-02-03 03:31 PM


nifty sis...you should tell the people that say that stuff...exactly what's in the poem.
poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
6 posted 2000-02-03 03:35 PM


scg: to quote shakespeare: "what is in a name?/ a rose by any other name would still smell as sweet"... what i mean by that is that the name does not make the person... look at the most influential figure in history, Jesus.  In his day, Jesus was a very common name... think of other famous people: George Washington, Charles Darwin, and Henry Ford... all common names... sure, there are some odd names in history (few people name their kid Adolf anymore), but it is the inside that makes the difference, not the title... think also of this: the most influential people in history have not been kings or princes, but simple men... thomas edison, jesus of nazareth, johann gutenburg (made the printing press)... these people changed history, yet they held no governmental title... so what is in a name? only what you put into it  

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

7 posted 2000-02-03 04:27 PM


That's a really great poem and I know exactly what you mean. With an Arabic name like Salma people always wonder why it's so different and weird and they usually can't pronounce it. But once people actually get to know you they meet the person behind the name and it's nice really. So just be yourself and go get um!

Salooma  

Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
8 posted 2000-02-03 07:38 PM


Hahahaa... I have a friend named Adolf! No... his last name is not Hitler! LOL
sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
9 posted 2000-02-04 09:16 AM


Jerome: thanks for the input..it isn't my name I'm worried about..It's living up to the example my great-grandmother set..people expect me to be like HER...not me

Salooma: DITTO!!!  

Jer: Tell Adolf I said "HI"    



[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-04-2000).]

jytree
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 336
omaha ark usa
10 posted 2000-02-04 10:47 AM


that was awsome I like it good job and all that

 

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