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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Hidden You walked through the valley of hidden trees Gracing through shadows soft as the breeze; Your dance charmed the creatures and pleased the man, Hold out your hand and allow the dove to land, It wishes to know from where it came Except you and the dove, the world is to blame. A rainbow falls from a cloud through the sky A voice bellowed from above saying she will die He had sent her so i had no control I just wished she didn't have to go I could only watch when she fell to the ground. She then departed and I heard a voice soft in tone Before me I saw the tree for a moment Then what i couldn't see was gone ---Written by:Hoppy 11-27-99 "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." SUBMIT YOUR POETRY HERE, AWSOME PAGE. NEW POETRY FORUM ADDED Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. THE PAGE OF PURE POETIC EXPRESSION!! |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
This is so beautiful! I really enjoyed reading it. The "valley of hidden trees" is an intriguing mental picture. Nice job. |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great job hoppy. I love the imagary that you have used in this poem. Keep up the good work! |
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