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sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-02-01 11:36 AM

I cannot promise you
That I will not change
I cannot promise you
That I will not be hurt
I cannot promise you
That I will not shout
I cannot promise you
That I will not run away
I cannot promise you
my faults will not show

But-
I can promise you
I will always be there
I can promis you
I will share my feelings
I can promise you
You will not be tied down
I can promise you
I will be honest
I can promise you
I will help you through tough times
But-
Most of all
I promise you
I will always love you

Me and my b/f got back together. This is sort of a celebration poem.

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

1 posted 2000-02-01 11:42 AM

I liked this one a lot. Congrats on you and your man getting back together. Hope it all works out for the best!

chic
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.

2 posted 2000-02-01 12:04 PM

yeeeeeeeeeeee haaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww!!!!!! way to go sis and i would also like to say congrats on gettin back together with the dude.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

3 posted 2000-02-01 02:31 PM

thanks for replying you two! it means alot!

"Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

ryun
Junior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 33
elsinore, ca, usa

4 posted 2000-02-01 03:42 PM

sweet poem,
congradulations on getting back together with your man!!

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

5 posted 2000-02-01 04:25 PM

scg: i really like the "but" lines... not sure why, but i feel that they really add to the poem... perhaps it's because they give a break from the flow of the poem.. *shrugs* either way, i like it... and congratulations and many happy tidings...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

6 posted 2000-02-02 03:06 PM

Ahh yes... congratulations! I guess this means were gonna see a lot of happy in love poetry now right? I am glad everything worked out in the end for you. Good job.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

7 posted 2000-02-02 03:25 PM

thanks Jer....i'll try to come up with something happy..if the thoughts will come to me..

"Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

Dusk Treader

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Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

8 posted 2000-02-02 05:06 PM

Nice poem! And congrats on getting back together with your man! Glad it all worked out for ya

In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

9 posted 2000-02-03 09:27 AM

thanks dusk! I really appreciate it!

Thanks all of you!

~~Lavada~~

"Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

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