Teen Poetry #2 |
The Writer |
Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Surrounded by a thousand sounds Yet sitting in silence Hearing nothing But the pen flying across paper Weaving emotions and colors with beautiful words Is the writer. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
The writer's thoughts are sweetest muse, They come and go, are put to use. They sometimes creep and sometimes spill, But all do flow from 'neath this quill. Some do shine and some do not, But each is worth it's very thought. Write on oh scribe, if you will, For I will read the thoughts you spill. Nice work. I enjoyed this. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
two terrific poems in one post...cool! Good job...to both of you! ~~Lavada "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Marilyn-Thanks! It means a lot to me that you responded...and what better way that in a poem. I really enjoyed yours as well!! College Girl-Thanks so much! I love reading your work as well!! ~Sarah |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
anytime Sarah! ~~Lavada |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Good work, Singer and Marilyn! I know about the feelings that you write about. I look forward to reading more of both of you! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
singer: a vivid and (i would say) accurate depiction of the writer and her muse... beautiful work... sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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ryun Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33elsinore, ca, usa |
your thoughts i see your feelings indeed as i sit here and read, it's good to me! but don't take my word for it you know it! |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Ryun, Jerome, and Lovebug-Thanks so much for replying! I really appreciate it!! ~Sarah |
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