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Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
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Fredonia, NY USA

0 posted 2000-02-01 11:17 AM


Surrounded by a thousand sounds
Yet sitting in silence
Hearing nothing
But the pen flying across paper
Weaving emotions and colors with beautiful words
Is the writer.

© Copyright 2000 Sarah Goldstein - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-02-01 11:52 AM


The writer's thoughts are sweetest muse,
They come and go, are put to use.
They sometimes creep and sometimes spill,
But all do flow from 'neath this quill.

Some do shine and some do not,
But each is worth it's very thought.
Write on oh scribe, if you will,
For I will read the thoughts you spill.

Nice work. I enjoyed this.  

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
2 posted 2000-02-01 12:48 PM


two terrific poems in one post...cool! Good job...to both of you!  

~~Lavada

 "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
3 posted 2000-02-01 02:11 PM


Marilyn-Thanks!  It means a lot to me that you responded...and what better way that in a poem.  I really enjoyed yours as well!!
College Girl-Thanks so much!  I love reading your work as well!!
~Sarah

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
4 posted 2000-02-01 02:56 PM


anytime Sarah!  

~~Lavada

LoveBug
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5 posted 2000-02-01 03:40 PM


Good work, Singer and Marilyn! I know about the feelings that you write about. I look forward to reading more of both of you!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
6 posted 2000-02-01 03:50 PM


singer: a vivid and (i would say) accurate depiction of the writer and her muse... beautiful work...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

ryun
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 33
elsinore, ca, usa
7 posted 2000-02-01 04:25 PM


your thoughts i see
your feelings indeed
as i sit here and read,
it's good to me!

but don't take my word for it you know it!

Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
8 posted 2000-02-01 05:57 PM


Ryun, Jerome, and Lovebug-Thanks so much for replying!  I really appreciate it!!
~Sarah

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