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ryun Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33elsinore, ca, usa |
My mind My flows The ways they go; You'll never know, See or understand These problems These thoughts Comin out of my hand It's like a paradox of thoughts, Rewriten to understand... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions! I understand the swirling of thoughts that you can't seem to make any sense of. I think we all go through that from time to time. Good Job, I will be looking for more from you.  Check your e-mail for a special greeting. |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Dear ryan ..good work..work hard i m new at this too so i know how u feel faith hope we see each others work more often! |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Good work again, ryun, and keep it up. Welcome to Passions, you're a really good poet. I've been a member for just over 2 weeks now, and I love it. "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
excellent poem! great description of the mind, i like! "Which is the dream?" SUBMIT YOUR POETRY HERE, AWSOME PAGE. http://members.xoom.com/weeklyhoppy |
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