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Love, A Memory

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Safwan Arekat
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Bahrain


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Love, A Memory


I remember love very well

I remember the love that I felt
You  were very close to me then
A memory in my heart is kept
A memory from a dreamy heaven

I remember you talking to me
with your brown eyes smiling
and conceded to unspoken plea
as you moved into closer filing

I whispered a hushed tone in your ear
You allowed me a hesitant approach
aside you had brushed a strand of hair
" tell me, and fear not a reproach"

How had they been in wit abound ?
those words I said to win your laugh
my heart a dance to twirl around
at music in the trumpetís draft  

Ever so more I was mighty pleased
in joy I bathed and in  glee I basked
as a touch of silken skin appeased
the prayer which my god I asked

*

"Silence there in the third row"
A voice interrupted our  rejoicing
"I told you to keep your voices low"
The teacher kept on harassing


But I remember love very well

Safwan Arekat http://magicboat.com

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 01-30-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

lol, those teachers, eh?  This is beautiful, well written work.  Your talent shines through in this, please keep it up!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

Salooma
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since 01-28-2000
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2 posted 01-31-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salooma

Beautiful poem....very nice tone and words. Keep up the great work!

Salma
Singer1981
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since 12-02-1999
Posts 148
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3 posted 01-31-2000 06:39 PM       View Profile for Singer1981   Email Singer1981   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Singer1981

I really liked this!  Very beautiful..keep it up!!
~Sarah
Mistikman
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since 01-10-2000
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4 posted 01-31-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Cool poem, the ending wasnt expected. I like that   Keep up the good work.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion
THE-1-U-DISLIKE
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5 posted 11-07-2003 11:23 PM       View Profile for THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Email THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for THE-1-U-DISLIKE

Do U still remember
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


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Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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