See if You Can Understand This One

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Teen Poetry #2

See if You Can Understand This One

hoppy
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since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-01-29 12:22 PM

If you can tell me what i'm talking about in this poem give it a shot, i like to watch people guess, noone's been right so far

Mirror

Mirror on the Wall
Picture of my face
From what I saw I began to fall
A conspired and ugly case
Man in the mirror
One I had never seen
Brain pulsates in fear
From now nothing pure nor clean
Broken images on the floor
Man looks in my face
Futily I reach for the door
My neck surrounded in lace
A tweek of the wrist, man full of lust
A scream of horror
I now return to dust

Smore
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since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

1 posted 2000-01-30 08:07 PM

I didnt get it, but maybe you could tell me?

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

2 posted 2000-01-30 08:13 PM

ok i'll explain, it's about a woman who's standing infront of a mirror and a man has broken into her house and she sees him standing behind her in the mirror, she gets scared and falls down, she tires to get away and reaches for the door but he gets to her first, then rapes her and strangles her, quiet morbid but i like the playing with words

"Which is the dream?"

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