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S3NSATION18
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 31


0 posted 2000-01-28 11:54 AM


when we broke up you acted like you didnt care
so i stopped caring.

you said its all about you now
like you've become all daring.

when you say your fine without me
its just a twisted little lie

its just a masquerade
to hide how you really feel inside

you waited to long to let your true feelings shine through...
what am i supposed to do?

you lost my love
you spoke to late

i found someone new
what a twist of fate

i wanted you when you did not want me
not my feelings have changed this you must see...

its just too late!


 

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-01-29 04:30 AM


Hey, neat poem. Shame whoever it was came around too late. oh well, tough luck for them I guess!  
Smore
Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67
el paso
2 posted 2000-01-30 08:04 PM


  This is really good, but you know, when someone is able to admit they were wrong, you shouldnt just push them away. Feelings come and go, try not to be too harsh with the fool who let you go.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

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