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Mario21
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since 1999-12-17
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0 posted 2000-01-28 09:42 AM



Love


Does love really exist or is it just a fairy tale told to us by those  who forget. Forget that we will one day grow up and learn the truth and we be wondering why people be layin on the couch talkin to Dr. Ruth. They’re not crazy just confused. Confused about this whole love thang and how well a fictional word can be used. If you can’t define a word than how can it be real. I know it’s not something you define it’s something you feel. Is it a real emotion or a thought in a head. I think it’s something they make up to make life a little better before we end up dead. But did anyone contemplate the downside to this thought. Like what if you don’t find love then all your hope is lost. You are left as an empty shell of a soul. Waiting for the day when you become old. Instead of living life to the fullest when you’re a young cat. You have no fun, zero,zilch,none your life is flat. What if love ruins your existence? Will your family have patience? Will they be able to forgive the emotion that took away their child. Now how’s that for having a love style. So before you say a word that may mean nothing. Do some research and inform me if it means something.


 Let it be done!

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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-01-28 11:14 AM


Love is whatever your heart says it is. Yes, it is confusing at times and it hurts at times
but it IS there: Within everyone is love. Not the same love but their definition of it. Love is a risky business but remember, risks set us free. Keep  

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-01-28 11:14 AM


Love is whatever your heart says it is. Yes, it is confusing at times and it hurts at times
but it IS there: Within everyone is love. Not the same love but their definition of it. Love is a risky business but remember, risks set us free. Keep  

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-01-28 11:16 AM


Sorry For double posting  
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