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Teen Poetry #2

dreams

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-01-27 10:18 PM

There are dreams that sail off to sea
And those which stay at home

Dreams in need of company
And those which stand alone

Dreams that stay inside all night
And never see the light,

But if dreams can come true
I swear tonight I'll dream of you.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-01-28 04:24 PM

I love it. I truly love it. It took my heart by surprise and made me think of one I love. Thank You for writing such a lovely poem:It has given me a moment of pure pleasure.

Duchessofhearts
Junior Member

since 2000-01-15

Posts 13

2 posted 2000-01-28 06:30 PM

Love this poem. Wish it was true.

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

3 posted 2000-01-28 08:39 PM

smore: simply exquisite! i absolutely adore this poem... the way you personify dreams and then the sneaky tie-in at the end... simply beautiful...

with utmost respect,
jerome the boy that wants more kool-aid

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

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