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What I wish I could say
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What I wish I could say |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Sometimes, I will sit and think About what I wish I could say I would scream it out to you If I only knew the way The way to overcome the fear Of saying it to you I dream of saying it every day But will this ever come true? If this dream ever came to be And I got to say this to you Here is what I would say And every word would be true... “It doesn’t matter what you say As long as I hear your voice And I’ll gladly give my life for yours If I am given the choice It doesn’t matter if you push me away Because I’ll be happy to feel your touch And you can be as mean as you want I won’t leave; I love you too much I wish you would say you loved me Even if it were a lie Because if you reject me now I’ll curl up and die” Yes, I would say this to you If I ever got the chance But, I’m just a coward Stuck in a hopeless romance So, I still sit and think About what I wish I could say Maybe I’ll say it sometime, Maybe... someday "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
awwww.... this was quite good... hopelessly in love... unrequited love... touching subject... well put.. Regret for things you did maybe tempered by time, regret for things you Didn't do, however, is inconsolable... -------823------- |
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DC Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 13Arkansas |
I love this poem. I felt like this in my last relationship. Now we're broke up, but I miss him more than words can describe. Keep up the great work! DC |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Oh Lovebug! This poem eerily reflects my last relationship......... great job! Vreni |
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S3NSATION18 Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
i can really relate to your poem its great...but the feeling isnt...to have feelings for someone so deep and so true and to not have them returned is the worse feeling ever...i know i've felt it more than once....just to have that person acknowledge you would make you happy. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great Poem, I have almost the exact same feelings for a girl at my school, except I did ask her out, and she did say no...  Thats life I guess, but I wish it was easier to let go and move on.I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"Unrequited love spoils the taste of peanut butter" (Or something like that). Love is a tricky thing. Between lovers, friends, parents. Still, as you live you learn. I don't think guys do though. Then again with the guys at my newly ex school, I can't help being biased against them. Anyway, don't give up hope. Maybe someday, something wonderful will happen to bring the two of you together. |
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
I did'nt know it was possible to put feelings into words as well as you did. Great job. Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Thanks for the nice comments, everyone! They mean a lot to me! Mistikman, at least you had the courage to say what you felt instead of just dreaming like I do... "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I loved your poem lovebug. Maybe you will find the strength inside of you to tell him. Don't give up without trying. |
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eve_angel Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 23Australia |
I love this poem. Keep em coming. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Or how about this one? Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great job as always. I wish you luck with that guy. Remember, even if he wants nothing to do with you, You'll still have me!<!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler </font> [This message has been edited by Jer (edited 04-02-2000).] |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is sad, in the fact that you feel you don't have the opportunity to say these things seize the day  hope everything works out for you.. Bec |
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KidS128111 Junior Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 13Northern California |
I'm really feelin' this poem. I always feel the way you describe in your poem at some point of a relationship (mostly at the beginning). Keep up the good work! djkidspinz@cs.com |
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