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My Juliet
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My Juliet |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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One voice cries out among thousands Can anyone hear? Does anyone care? His head turns, he's searching, He feels her despair He can taste her fury, her madness, He tries desperately to find her To break through the masses that bind her Her volume is rising, climbing As he runs to her, flies to her, Races against time to her Monsterous thunder! Flash of light! "Oh my darling, my beloved!" So silent, so still He collapses by her side Blood turns to ice at the sight She is gone, lost in her plight He lowers his head, one tear falls Then another, another, another Her face is wet, his tears on her eyes They do not see through his sorrow's disguise He's running, running, away from this place This place where she met her fate Where his love came too late |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
wow....so powerful, and sad! I'm still wiping the tears away...*sniff*...i loved your poem...you are really talented! keep it up! make sure you make some happy ones too...just kidding  "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Thanx, actually I do write cheerful poetry too, but it turns out that this one wasn't. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Well, I personally am a big fan of tragic poetry. Appeals to the dark side of me, you could say. And this appealed quite well. Exellent work, I enjoyed this a lot! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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