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DC
Junior Member

since 2000-01-22

Posts 13
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-01-22 02:38 PM

You told me you were gone
When you were really home.
I figured it out
That line is so old.
Don't ask me why
But I let that one fly.
It's just part of love I guess,
So I'll give it a second chance.
Then I lied to your face
And also behind your back.
But don't be angry
'Cause don't you do that?
So I messed up,
And did some things wrong.
What about you?
You're not the perfect one.
Well, it looks like we both
Got our share of mistakes.
So lets forgive and forget,
And everything will be okay.

DC

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

1 posted 2000-01-22 03:53 PM

beautifully expressed...

Regret for things you did maybe tempered by time, regret for things you Didn't do, however, is inconsolable...
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LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-01-22 04:26 PM

That was great. You did a wonderful job.

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

3 posted 2000-01-22 05:07 PM

i love this

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-01-22 05:36 PM

I'd like to expend you a most Passionate Welcome to our board!

This is how many of us have felt at one time or another and you expressed your feelings very well in this.

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

5 posted 2000-01-22 06:51 PM

Great job. Welcome to Passions. This was a well chosen first post.

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

6 posted 2000-01-22 07:54 PM

Great poem! Keep up the good work!

abra-cadabra
Member

since 1999-06-21

Posts 75
Florissant, Missouri, USA

7 posted 2000-01-23 02:16 PM

Wow. This is very, very good. I liked this one alot. It kinda describes my relationship I'm in. Keep it up!!

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member

since 2000-01-19

Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

8 posted 2000-01-23 06:34 PM

This was was great...it "kinda'" relates to my relatiobship, too.

(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

DC
Junior Member

since 2000-01-22

Posts 13
Arkansas

9 posted 2000-01-25 08:27 PM

Thanx everyone for the input. I'm finishing a poem that I've been working on. I'm going to post it soon.
DC

Desiree Cunningham

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