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sweetcollege_girl
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just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-01-21 11:12 AM


My heart won't let go
Even though you found a new love
My mind won't say goodbye
You have hurt me again

Sometimes I wake up crying at night
Cold, scared and alone
I scream out your name
but all I hear is the echo in the empty room

I can't find a anything
That can stop the pain
It is much too great
I won't ever be the same

I can give you many reasons
to show you I still care
I try to send them to you
But it ends in a whisper

You said we're much too different
That it would never work out
That's your opinion
My heart knows the truth

not as good as my others, i know..but i tried


© Copyright 2000 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-01-21 12:02 PM


Good work! That's how I would feel if I ever got someone and lost them! Keep up the good work!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
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2 posted 2000-01-21 05:36 PM


I really like this one.   Good job!

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



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