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Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

0 posted 2000-01-21 05:20 AM


You

Your mind, body
Soul and heart
I know inside
I cannot part

Your look so gentle
Smile so sweet
In an instant
Goose bumps begin their creep

Your hair so soft
Eyes so tender
My heart knows you
Without even a hender  

All the beauty
That you are
Indeed your love
Surpasses all        

I posted this for my friend, Jeff. He's beginning to write poems, and he would like to have some feed back. I told him about all of us <the family of friends>   so he gave me the go ahead.


He knows my opinion  


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



© Copyright 2000 Stephani Ann - All Rights Reserved
sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-01-21 11:15 AM


Tell Jeff he's a poet in the making...and to kepe up the great work! I loved it!  
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