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Teen Poetry #2

needs a title(sug.)

Kitty
Junior Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 20
Paris, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-01-20 05:08 PM

Alone,
lost in the world,
searching,
searching for something,
something that can't be found.

Feelings,
emotions hidden away,
wanting,
wanting something,
something I can't have.

Fire,
passions I feel,
looking,
looking for someone,
someone who doesn't exist.

He has made everything beautiful in its time
Ecclesiastes 3:11

Kitty

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member

since 2000-01-19

Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

1 posted 2000-01-20 11:21 PM

I'm not very imaginative. So, I don't do well with making things up, but how about PASSION(s). I thought of it without even realizing you included the word "passions" until I read it over for a second time.

LOL! I realy enjoyed this poem. It's so true. Everyone feels this way sometimes. It's hard to deal with, but we all get through it eventually. I'm struggling at the moment with something I THINK I DO HAVE, but I'm not quite sure.

(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

2 posted 2000-01-21 05:37 PM

You should entitle it " Soul Searching ". When I read the poem I get the feeling that there are such strong passions that are restrained but, your in search of a soul that you can share them with. However, that soul dosen't exist! Anyway, in all this was an outstanding piece.

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