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angel6917
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0 posted 2000-01-20 03:53 PM


DAYDREAM

Sitting here in class,
I realize that I'm daydreaming
about you again.

I'm picturing your arms
holding me tight,
keeping me safe.

I keep hearing your voice,
telling me everything
will be all right.

I feel your lips on mine,
giving me a kiss
that promises your love.

Now I hear the bell,
jarring me from my daydream,
only for me to dream it again.



 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

© Copyright 2000 Kristi Stanczak - All Rights Reserved
Kitty
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since 2000-01-18
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Paris, Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-01-20 05:12 PM


I love poems that are that real. I can really relate to this one. Great, I love it.

[This message has been edited by Kitty (edited 01-20-2000).]

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-01-20 11:13 PM


I agree with Kitty. Real-life stuff is the best. especially when you can relate to it. Great poem.  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



angel6917
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3 posted 2000-01-21 03:51 PM


Thank you Kitty and Stephanie.  I actually wrote that poem while I was thinking about the guy I've fallen head over heels for.  I really appreciate your support!

~Kristi Lynn


 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

Duchessofhearts
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 13

4 posted 2000-01-21 06:34 PM


great poem.
i got in trouble b/c i did the samething.
(i trouly love youre poem)

LoveBug
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5 posted 2000-01-21 07:43 PM


Hey, I'm in a situation a lot like yours. All I dream about is HIM... Keep up the good work!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

Zombie Man
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6 posted 2000-01-21 11:54 PM


Hey i gotta say that is true in life. When you really have feelings for a person, they take over your mind. Well writin and with feelings. Good stuff. Keep on writing.

                                 Zombie Man


Zombie Man
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since 1999-06-22
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7 posted 2000-01-21 11:54 PM


Hey i gotta say that is true in life. When you really have feelings for a person, they take over your mind. Well writin and with feelings. Good stuff. Keep on writing.

                                 Zombie Man


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