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angel6917
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0 posted 2000-01-20 09:35 AM


THANK YOU

I want to thank you
for being there for me,
either when I'm down,
or just need someone to talk to.

I want to thank you
for caring about me,
when it seems that
no one else does.

I want to thank you
for believing in me,
telling me I have potential,
even when I have no faith in myself.

I want to thank you
for loving me,
being a person I can count on,
for being my  friend.


 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

© Copyright 2000 Kristi Stanczak - All Rights Reserved
Jer
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1 posted 2000-01-20 03:10 PM


This is a great thank you poem!  I like it. Who is it for? However,  this goes to show everyone how important a friendship truly is.
angel6917
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2 posted 2000-01-20 03:45 PM


Jer:
The poem was written for a few people that I know, but mostly for my friend, John, who's helped me through a lot.  I wanted to write it for someone else, but I don't know them well enough to put something really meaningful into words for them yet....  
And yes, friendship means a lot to me, but people like to take advantage of that.  I'm learning not to trust like I used to, but still remain close to the right people...

-Kristi Lynn


 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
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3 posted 2000-01-20 06:16 PM


This is such a meaningful poem. I'm sending it to my best-friend. A poem like this can really make someone's day.  


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
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4 posted 2000-03-22 05:18 PM


heheheh, How very sweet. Very nice poem Kristi. Heh, boredom sucks, and having time to be bored sucks more. Not having time to be bored is the worst though, heh, got a catch-22 here.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
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5 posted 2000-03-22 05:52 PM


Sam~
HUH?  
Thanks for the nice reply to my poem,
but I only got some of the rest of what you said.
~Kristi Lynn

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-03-22 05:54 PM


I think you poem is very sweet, and excellently written. It's nice to have someone solid in your life, isn't it? Great work!

 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)


DragonFang
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7 posted 2000-03-23 02:03 PM


well, what I said is that it isn't good when you have spare time on your hands and get bored. But it is worse when you have no time at all to get bored, cuase that just means you're way too bussy.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


Chip133
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since 2000-03-23
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8 posted 2000-03-23 09:17 PM


You are such a nice friend.  Too bad that you
trust the WRONG person!!  Guess who this is!!
                LUV YA LOTS!!!!!

rachella
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since 2000-02-10
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Indiana
9 posted 2000-03-23 11:36 PM


This is very good.  They must be a wonderful friend to recieve such an honor as having a poem written for them.  You must be a wonderful friend for writting it. Keep it up!
angel6917
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10 posted 2000-03-27 09:40 AM


Chip~
My guess is Heather, right?
I think??
~Kristi Lynn

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
11 posted 2000-03-27 09:58 AM


I have a friend like that. I also trust too much. I am trying to be less trustful but find it difficult. The world is so beautiful through my eyes,  I can't stop trying to love it. Great poem.
jytree
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12 posted 2000-03-27 10:17 AM


Trust is a hard thing to give to the wrong people

Trust in yourself and find a friend that will not turn their back on you when you need them


 For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

Mellon Collie
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since 2000-03-25
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13 posted 2000-03-27 11:37 AM


dear angel,
    
     this is a very touching piece.  i'm happy to see that at least someone still appreciates their friends and the sacrifices often made for friendships.  intimacy with friends is one of the most important things in life and i personally strive hard to maintain and to help foster my friendships with others.  anyone would be both blessed and lucky to have you as a friend and i hope that those who befriend you are just as worthy  

sincerely,
the beautiful freak

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
14 posted 2000-03-27 11:13 PM


I remember this one.... I'll always be here for ya. Can't wait until one day we can really meet!
Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
15 posted 2000-03-28 03:25 AM


Dam girl your good! You have touched my heart all over again. I really like your style. Please keep up the good work! I can't say any there has been any of your poems I haven't liked.


Yours sincerley
Dean


 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
16 posted 2000-03-28 07:51 AM


This is wonderful, you have someone very special there. I think to that they are lucky to have you as well.
LoL tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
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17 posted 2000-03-28 09:36 AM


Thanks all...
The person I wrote it for and I don't talk as much as we used to, but I can still trust him and all that good stuff.
Dean~
Thank you for your sweet comments.  I'm flattered...
Jer~
I'm anxiously awaiting the day we meet as well.  Thank you so much for being here for me, especially during this hard time I'm having.
Love ya'll,
Kristi Lynn

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