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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2000-01-20 09:28 AM


This is my sister's poem..i guess you could say she's a poet in the making  

Alone
Lost
Scared
Why me?

Lost loves
Anger
Depression
Why me?

Confused
Hated
Arguments
Why me?

Someone please help me
I need to know...
WHY ME??

go easy...it's her first  

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angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
1 posted 2000-01-20 10:49 AM


I like your sister's poem, it really shows her pain.  Tell her to keep up the good work.  Putting emotion into words can be hard, but she did good.  

Angel6917


 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-01-20 11:26 PM


This was great! Tell your sister she's NOT alone. There's always someone there, and she's not the only one who feels this way. "Keep smiling sweetie, it'll get better someday. One day someone will come along to ease your pain and the emptyness will hopefully disappear.  "


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



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