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LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-01-19 05:46 PM

What do you see
As you gaze around
The empty life
I've watched you live?

Endless faces
A parade of faces
Who turn their faces
From your stare.

As you look on
You seek to find
A single truth
To prove your soul.

And while you search
Your eyes like burning
I feel such yearning
For them to rest on me.

Nights
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 56

1 posted 2000-01-19 06:30 PM

This is a nice poem. Sometimes i feel exactly what you wrote in the third stanza. I hope to see more from you.

"It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh
it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

2 posted 2000-01-19 09:47 PM

Hi, Welcome to Passions. This was a great first post. I too love the third stanza but I think the forth has all the emotion in it. Good job.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-01-19 10:04 PM

I would like to officially welcome you to Passions. I enjoyed your first piece and will be looking for more by you.

Check your e-mail for a special greeting.

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member

since 2000-01-19

Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

4 posted 2000-01-19 11:36 PM

Great poem! Besides the 3rd & 4th stanza, (I liked the whole thing!

)

(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Dean
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 120
Canada

5 posted 2000-01-19 11:46 PM

I Like your stuff!! I can totally relate to your poem!! keep up the good work!!

"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

6 posted 2000-01-20 10:35 PM

Welcome to Passions! And enjoyed the poem. Lovely.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-01-21 04:57 PM

Thank you all for responding so quickly! I appreciate your comments and I will look for any new poems by you as well. It's nice to join the family.

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