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Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

0 posted 2000-01-19 02:06 PM


He was here with me
He was there with me
He was everywhere with me

But now it's hard to find him
He comes here
He goes there
He goes everywhere

But I am barely around
I brought him here
I brought him there
I brought him everywhere

Now he has places to go
People to see
Now he goes everywhere without me

We're drifting apart

And it's really beginning to hurt my heart

I've been trying
But I just end up crying

He just doesn't understand where I'm trying to go
If he doesn't come back
I might be the one to let him go

Then he will be hurt too
Maybe he'll understand
Maybe he'll come back to me

We'll be here together
We'll go there together
We'll even go everywhere together




 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



© Copyright 2000 Stephani Ann - All Rights Reserved
sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-01-19 03:51 PM


Loved the poem Stephani...really did...wonderful!  
Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-01-19 04:46 PM


Thanks!  


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


Kitty
Junior Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 20
Paris, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-01-19 04:54 PM


I loved your poem, and I really hope it works out for you two. I know how you feel.

 He has made everything beautiful in its time
Ecclesiastes 3:11

Kitty

Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
4 posted 2000-01-19 09:28 PM


Wow.... good job.  Have you informed this guy how you feel?  If I was confronted on this I would feel sorry and have aleast some explaining and apolgizing to do. Anyway, good job and a warm friendly Welcome to Passions to ya!
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-01-19 10:12 PM


Welcome to our passions family. I hope to see more of you in the future.  

check your e-mail.

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
6 posted 2000-01-19 11:26 PM


Thank everyone! Trust me Jer, I've told him. He just doesn't get it. I don't understand why not though?!


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


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