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Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada

0 posted 2000-01-18 11:54 PM


Death knocked upon his door
little did he know what was in store
Death did not win the fight
because he strugled it every night
death aproches him again and again
with my love death will not win
life is stronger then death
Death will not steal his breath
He will never die or have to say good by
cause a peace of him is inside me
nothing can divide me


 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


© Copyright 2000 James Dean - All Rights Reserved
LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-01-19 05:48 PM


I just wanted to say great poem.
Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
2 posted 2000-01-19 09:36 PM


Dude, my man Deano.....  what has gottin into you?  I like it.  You work has all the sudden become VERY powerful.
Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
3 posted 2000-01-21 02:58 AM


Very powerful (like Jer said) with a hint of sweetness.

~ ~


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."



angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
4 posted 2000-01-21 10:46 AM


Dean:  I totally agree with Jer and Stephani, your poem was very powerful and sweet at the same time.  So far everything of yours I've read has impacted me in some way or another, and this one does, too.
~Kristi Lynn


 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-01-21 04:42 PM


Dean!! what ever you did I must say I love it! You have developed a syle that suits you to a T. Wonderful work my friend.


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