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Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada

0 posted 2000-01-18 11:51 PM


People

People obnoxious and cruel.
People nothing but fools.
People insensitive and full of hate.
People will use you for there own bate.
People evil and disgusting.
People that I feel like not discussing.


 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


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Mistikman
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-01-18 11:52 PM


Heh, am I sensing somewhat of a bitter disgust for the world?   good poem, short, simple, and to the point.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
2 posted 2000-01-19 12:01 PM


Yeah... I agree....  Hey Dean,  it sounds like you need to go get a happy pill.! lol  Good job though.  I feel this way sometimes also.
Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
3 posted 2000-01-19 06:36 PM


we ALL feel this way sometimes  
some more than others

nice "rhyming" scheme too  


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


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