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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-01-18 08:43 AM


I walked alone,
on a beach of darkness,
with shadows,
and spirits above.
I talked with them,
and heard all their sorrow,
and all the stories,
untrue.
I listened to the moaning,
mystifiacle spirits,
that one day,
would be set free.
I journeyed along,
with theses spirits,
and the spirits,
were friends with me.
Fascination,
astoniting light,
that blackend the darkness,
and seized the light.
Fascination,
all sorts of fun,
run, run, run.

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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
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just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-01-18 12:40 PM


great piece of poetry you have here..good work if i've ever seen it...keep it up   i look forward to hearing more
Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
2 posted 2000-11-08 04:19 PM


thanks. I'm just addin this to my library.

Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-15 07:44 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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