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0 posted 2000-01-12 03:46 PM


This is a rough draft, so I'll take any suggestions to make it better! Thanks

June

There’s nothing I dread more than June
There’s no word that scares me so
Because June is the dreaded month
That you will have to go

June is supposed to be the month of growth
The month all living things thrive
But my soul will be dark and wilting
I don’t know if I can survive

What will I do after you leave?
How will I live after you’re gone?
People tell me I’ll get though
But I don’t think I can carry on

I’ve always known that you would have to go
With the fair month of June
But I never thought that this month
Would approach us so, so soon

There are a lot of things in life to dread
But none of them takes my breath
As the thought of you leaving my life in June
It’s a fate much worse than death

You see me as a friend, and nothing else
But I love you as much more
But will I tell you this before June?
I’ve never said it before

I just hope that, when you leave
That terrible June day
And go on to live you life
And go so far away

That you will remember me
Because I will remember you
And that, sometimes, you will think of me
Because that’s all I’ll ever do

And I hope that you will think back
As you are enjoying living so far away
That maybe, you might just care
As you think back to that June day

Care that my heart was broken
And, maybe come and visit soon
Because you’ll remember that terrible day
That terrible time in June

~LoveBug~


 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

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Jer
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1 posted 2000-01-12 05:26 PM


I can feel your sadness in this one LoveBug.  Don't worry about thing.  I'm sure something is bound to happen sooner or later. Plus I know you will survive if and when he leaves in June.  Just remember....  Love comes and gose, but friendship is forever.

Ohh  P.S.  Not to be rude but.... I wish June would come quicker so I can get out of school.  I need that Major in Fire Sciences.

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2 posted 2000-01-12 10:06 PM


Thanks, Jer! I hope love DOES come to me soon. I hope it's him, becuase I don't know if I'll have the strenth to look for someone else after he leaves.

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

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