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Mistikman
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-01-11 08:17 PM



Heres another one for your reading pleasure, hope ya like it.


The Four Most Painful Words

Lets never again kiss
Lets never hold hands
Lets ignore each other

Just walk away
Just cry in shame
Just want for her

Be unhappy for what could have been
Be a curse to myself
Be self-destructive

Friends don't hurt friends like this
Friends care, they do not turn their heads
Friends move in the opposite direction that we do

Sigh……
Why does it have to hurt so?

© Copyright 2000 Travis Welton - All Rights Reserved
edgar_derby
New Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 9
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2000-01-11 09:18 PM


sorry about the girl. i know precisely how you feel; i just found out that the girl i'm smitten with is a lesbian.
anyway, i know. try making fun of melodrama. write an entire weepy angry piece, then say, "and then i sneezed, and since then everyone has called me boogerman."

Mistikman
Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
2 posted 2000-01-12 03:27 AM


I revised the poem a little. I decided to make each line 4 words, to further work with the title. Also, if you didnt notice, the 4 words it actually refers to begin each sentence in the 4 sections.


The Four Most Painful Words

Lets never again kiss
Lets never hold hands
Lets ignore each other

Just walk away now
Just cry in shame
Just want for her

Be unhappy with life
Be my own curse
Be hateful of myself

Friends don't hurt friends
Friends don't ignore pain
Friends always move forward

Sigh...
Why does it have to hurt so?

Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
3 posted 2000-01-12 05:31 PM


Hey mistikman that was clever.  I useualy see stuff like that but I have to admit,  I didn't see it until you pointed it out.  I like it.  It reminds me of the problem I have.  Those truly are the most dreaded words to a guy.
loverofmany
New Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 1
Perth Amboy, NJ, 08861
4 posted 2000-01-13 05:48 PM


So what do you say to somebody you hate?
Is anyone trying to bring trouble your way?
What is all things, and a BLOOD in your way?
Just study your tape with NWA

One day I was walking by,
With a walkman on,
When I caught a guy
Give me and awkward eye

I strangled him there in the parking lot
with his car knot
I don't give a F*ck if it's dark or not
I'm harder than me
trying to park a Dodge..

But I'm drunk as f*ck
Right next to a humongous truck
in a 2-car garage.

I got 2 broken legs
trying to walk it off..
F you, too b*tch, "CALL THE COPS!"
I'll kill you and those loud ass, mother f*cking barking dogs!

And when the cops came through, me and Dre still next to a burnt down house.
With a can full of can and hand full of matches -
Still haven't found out!

So from here on out, I'm a corporate tool.
Today's the day - Tomorrow's Anew.
While you around I'm still trying to choke you
to death with a Chareston Chew.

CICA CICA CICA - Slim Eddie
Hotter than a set of Twin Babies
In a Mercedes (Benz)
With the windows up
When the tint goes up
to the mid 80's

Calling men 'Ladies'.
Sorry, Doc, but I've been crazy.
There's a way that you can save me.
It's ok go with him, Halley.

Nowadays People like to talk,
But they don't know what to say
Nothing comes out
When they move their lips
It's a just a bunch of gibberish
And the Muthaf'er act like they
Forgot about Dre.

Nowadays People like to talk,
But they don't know what to say
Nothing comes out
When they move their lips
It's a just a bunch of gibberish
And the Muthaf'er act like they
Forgot about Dre...

   Peace
       sLiM EddiE

MyseriousR
New Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 1
Perth Amboy, NJ, 08861
5 posted 2000-01-13 05:49 PM


I thought of this poem the first time I saw
her smile.

Your Smile

When you smile
my heart stops by such beuty.

When you smile
my heary is fulfilled.

When you smile
I no longer feel alone.

When you smile
it takes my breath away.

When you smile
I feel no pain.

And when you smile
I thank God everyday that I have you.


     From Raymond,to my girl
                      Damaris.

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