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foolinlove
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 5


0 posted 2000-01-09 12:11 PM


I'm new in here but my poems i feel need to be read.


I am a slowly dying fire:
Waiting for the flame to go out
I am a raging bull:
looking for something to ram

I am a fine wine;
sweeter with age
I am a powerful engine battery;
always working yet slowly dying every day

I am a red rose;
just now blooming.
yet never assuming
when i will shed my rose
and shrivel up to die

I am a singer,singing a sad
slow,country song.
Always thinking of the music
and the fans

                  I am a poet.


[This message has been edited by foolinlove (edited 01-11-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 foolinlove - All Rights Reserved
Quiet Lightning
Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56

1 posted 2000-01-09 05:13 PM


welcome to passions.Sounds like you had it rough with love.
Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
2 posted 2000-01-09 11:23 PM


Ahhh... yes.  Welcome to Passions.  I liked your poem. It is such a common feeling that alot of teens share.  Good read.  Thanks.
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-01-10 05:13 PM


Welcome to Passions. Did you check your e-mail? Love is a difficult thing to understand at any age. Well done.
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