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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA 
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I walk into the room, Our eyes always meet. You smile but only in a greeting that I can see. I smile back and try to look away, However, I can't. The light, The love, The happiness is all too bright. Yet, I wonder, What dose she see in my eyes? Do they give away my feelings? Thoughts? Emotions? |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
If there's love in those eyes, she will see it. Exellent work!  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
I wish she would. Sometimes I think I make it all up in my head! |
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eagle Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39singapore |
Yup, I know what you mean.  |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
Who are you talking about? |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
I totally can relate!!! I like your **** man keep up the sweet ass work!!!!! Deano [This message has been edited by Dean (edited 01-08-2000).] |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Hahaha.... Thanks Dean. I am glad you like my work. Eagle: I think just about everyone has had this feeling. I just wish I wasn't! Quiet Lightning: I am talking about this girl that I know. I don't know if she knows that I like her as much as I do. I guess you can say I don't want her to laugh at me and ruin a friendship if I tell her. I rather have her figure it out so I don't get the "Fuzzy end of the loli-pop!" if you know what I mean |
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