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Am I Crazy????

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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden


0 posted 01-07-2000 08:22 AM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Allysa


I know this is old by now,
but please listen a little longer.
I know this is old by now,
but you make my heart stronger.
I know this is old by now,
But I can't help but say,
I love you so much,
that's so true everyday.
I know this is old by now,
but please do care.
I know this is old by now,
but my love I will share.
I know this is getting older,
as you read this poem,
but I can't help myself,
I feel so alone.
I think that I need you,
to get through the day,
so please will you help me,
things always go your way.
I need you by my side,
then I won't be alone.



 Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through.
© Copyright 2000 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
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1 posted 01-07-2000 06:17 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Are you crazy for wanting love and someone to be by your side?  I don't think so!  Rememebr though, being alone isn't that bad.  Relish that time, enjoy the peace and quiet rather than dwelling on being lonely!
Enjoyable poem Allysa!

 JOY

Jer
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2 posted 01-07-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for Jer   Email Jer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jer

I agree with Joy.  Don't become self-dependent on a relationship with someone. You really do not need someone with you 24 / 7. Enjoy your time by yourself and look for that right someone.  I have been in so many relationships that turned out bad because I only needed the person to be there and give love.  I truly did not love them.  Anyway, it is a healthy feeling so don't feel alone.  If you want to talk more about this matter, e-mail me.  I am full of wisdom.
Marilyn
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3 posted 01-07-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

There is a difference to solitary and alone. A great writer said that once. It is very true....A quote from him "I was walking in the park on day enjoying my solitude when I saw a couple walking. They stoped and he touched her face and kissed her lips. Then I felt my lonliness."

Do not be afraid to explore yourself and find out who you are in solitude. There is no shame in solitude or lonliness. Depth of character comes from feeling each moment and learning from them.

Be strong and know you are worth only the man that will never cause you pain.
Dean
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4 posted 01-08-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Dean   Email Dean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dean

This is an example of a ****ing great poem!! I can totally relate to this!!! keep up the good work!!!

Deano<!signature-->

<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano  

</font>

[This message has been edited by Dean (edited 01-08-2000).]
Allysa
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5 posted 11-08-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

thanks ya all, just addin this to my library.

Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not
Artic Wind
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6 posted 11-15-2007 07:44 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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