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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-01-05 05:55 PM


This is a really haphazard sort of poem that I wrote today that gets a lot of my chest. So forgive the poor form.


Forget that English paper
Questions for Science go down the drain
Geography isn't real pleasent
I won't do it
I don't care!
Someone just sign the papers...
To get me out of here
This place is really starting to get to me
Let me out, please!
These bars are confining
I'd leave but I can't, you see
For my future is the only thing keeping me here
Another day.
I'm unaware of the outside world
Yelling in my ears
I'll block 'em all out
I DON'T CARE!
And right now,
Not caring...
Isn't so bad!


 JOY


© Copyright 2000 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
1 posted 2000-01-05 08:31 PM


Such a common feeling we have.  Someday you just are not motivated to do all the things school requires you to do.  Then top it off with college apps. and you have a deadly combination.  What can I say, it will all be over soon!

 *~* Come work for the Lord. The work is hard, the hours are long and the pay is low. But the retirement benefits are out of this world. *~*

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-01-06 05:39 PM


What can I say, but I hope so!

 JOY


Leigh
Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 20

3 posted 2000-01-06 08:32 PM


I know exactly what you're saying Joy! I feel like that a lot!! Sometimes it's ok to just not care. Right? =) I enjoyed the poem!
Dean
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
4 posted 2000-01-07 12:30 PM


S up girl?? I like how your peom shows days daily stresses!! Keep up the good work girl!!  

 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-01-07 06:14 PM


Thanks for the replies Leigh and Dean!


 JOY


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