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The Past Year
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The Past Year |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA 
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Reflecting the past year. Now the time as come. Journey in the new year, Be proud of what I've done. I've prayed, dreamed, and wished, Some have come true. I have written some poems Then read some of everyone else’s too. My fourth year of writing. This year almost done. Made a big move, Made some new friends too. Have enjoyed everyone. So now for this past year I know I shall be proud I started my writing strong Then met a good crowd They all dream and wish Just as I always do. So to all my new friends I do hope yours come true I have cried many times Wrote down crying tears But I hope we stay friends For many, many more years. [This message has been edited by Jer (edited 01-05-2000).] |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
beautiful |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Lovely. Very much so. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Jer, another great poem! Conveys emotion quite effectively! :.) Vreni |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Thank you everyone for the all the great comments. They mean more then you think. |
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