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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
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0 posted 2000-01-04 10:12 PM


The light breeze
whipping a strand
of her hair...
Clouded sunshine
sprinkled with
warming caresses...
The familiar scent
of newly shaven grass
in the air...
A slight humming somewhere...
Half-closed eyes,
encompassed in calmness...
Drifting slowly,
feeling the sway...
She’s lost in that splendor
moment of time...
I'm wallowing in
thoughts of you...



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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-01-05 05:59 PM


Very nice, Jer!

 JOY


Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
2 posted 2000-01-05 10:27 PM


How very lovely.  Nicely done!

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-01-06 11:58 AM


Enjoyed this one Jer. Nice work.  
Leigh
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 20

4 posted 2000-01-06 08:34 PM


that was great Jer! Keep posting so I can read more!
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