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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2000-01-04 04:19 PM



He stole your soul.
He barganed again.
He begged and begged,
to be you friend.
He tortured and teased,
and fought with might.
But one day his courage,
turned into his fright.
He loved you once,
once upon a time.
I know you loved,
his little ryhmes.
But you hated his jokes,
and his sudden tease.
I don't know how,
you handeled it with ease.
Your tries to stay hidden,
were suddenly egnored.
and one day,
he thought you were a bore.
So he came to your house,
and he saw it all.
Your life,
your death,
you strife and your fall.



© Copyright 2000 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
Maitay
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
1 posted 2000-01-04 05:15 PM


THs was an awesome poem, to wonderful for words. I think that every girl has gone thorugh this. good job..  

 ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~



Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
2 posted 2000-11-08 04:22 PM


thanks much. just addin this to my library.

Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-15 07:44 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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