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Untitled (Need Some Sugg.)
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Untitled (Need Some Sugg.) |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA 
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The wind is wailing, Screaming, I turn ad face the ferocious air. It speaks! But what words are spoken here? Tell tale of rage, shattered homes, and translucent Wings of purple and gold. Multi-colored raindrops blind me to the darkness. Tonight I travel with the wind, To hunt the streets of New York, For the reason of desolation I feel. The wind grows stronger. The rain sets in, And slowly drowns away The life and hope Of a homeless man. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent work! I could see the images, feel the sadness woven within this poem. As for a name, I'm not exactly sure, but if I think of something, I'll let you know! Keep up the great work!  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
I definitely agree with Alwye! Great work! Keep it up. |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Wow. Very lovely work! ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Leigh Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 20 |
That was great! Keep it up!!!  ) |
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Leigh Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 20 |
oops, didn't mean to make that smiley face with a cigarette! I meant to make a regular one! |
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