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Diajua
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since 2000-01-03
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0 posted 2000-01-03 11:42 PM


        
                    LOVE

Tell me why love hurts and causes so much pain.    
Never leaves when you want it to,
Never comes when you need it.
They say good things come to those who wait,
I waited it came and it left again.
I don't mean to be a pest and boast,
When does my turn get here.
How come it's taking so long?
I want to be one of those girls talking about my man.
I want to be the one playing with him in the sand.
Love is confusing,
Love is strong but what is love if before you know,
It's gone........

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Blue Eyed Wanderer
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 84
Rhode Island, US
1 posted 2000-01-04 05:16 PM


Your turn WILL come eventually, but waiting is the real test    I liked the poem a lot! Welcome to Passions! I hope to read more from you.
~Jess~

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-01-04 08:09 PM


Welcome to Passions. This is a question may ask and we can only wait. I am no longer a teen and I still wait. It is what you do with yourself and your life while you wait that is important. Love will come when it is right, just don't go looking too hard for it. You may not like what you end up with.

I hope to see more of your work in the future.  

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