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Torture

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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden


0 posted 01-03-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Allysa


She sat by the fir trees,
in a garden of growth.
Where tigers,
sometimes went to loath.
Her coat of red,
a burden it carried.
Her vulgularity,
beneath it was burried.
Her head,
swung low.
A price,
it did tow.
But eyes,
like the deep blue sea.
She was frightend by men.
And hurt, you see.
In the garden of growth.
Beneath the fir trees.
Vulgar, and cruel.
But scared and misjudged.
A look of pure domesticality.
And banned, she was.
From a world of love,
and a world of hate.
Beneath,
a lovely golden gate.
So she went to the fir trees,
in a garden of growth.
Where tigers
sometimes went to loath,
and tease her.
about her misjudged fortune.
But for her,
it wasn't about torture.

 Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through.
© Copyright 2000 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
Angela16
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1 posted 01-03-2000 05:45 PM       View Profile for Angela16   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angela16

i really like the style of writing you used in this poem!!  It's a really great poem!

 Angela
Marilyn
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2 posted 01-03-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

A very interesting piece this. It deserves a second read and I will give it that later. Today I am ill and can not focus my brain to read between the lines. Well done.
Allysa
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In an upside-down garden


3 posted 11-08-2000 04:24 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

thanks all. just addin this to my library.

Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not
Artic Wind
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4 posted 11-15-2007 07:44 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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