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Jinx
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since 1999-12-22
Posts 7
Wilkes-Barre PA

0 posted 1999-12-30 10:55 PM


“Mistake”

One more opportunity
Is all I desperately want
At that piece of happiness
That was impossible to grasp

The stroke of genius
Let me down again
And all of my desire
Can’t take away this suffering

Many times I had the chance
But through my fingers it slipped
And happiness I could’ve gripped
If only pride I could put away

A forlorn coward
Afraid to ask, afraid to tell
For missing my chance
From paradise I fell



© Copyright 1999 Michael Gorham - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
1 posted 1999-12-30 11:08 PM


Me like.  Very lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Leigh
Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 20

2 posted 1999-12-31 10:54 AM


Very nice and heartfelt. I like it!
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