Spring sprung (an old poem)

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Spring sprung (an old poem)

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-30 03:36 PM

Spring sprung so unexpected
From melting snow
I stood in awe
Observed perfection of its flow
So flawlessly performed
Each pitch connected
Played by the notes
Reformed in form
So worthy of great words
And yet neglected
My soul alone became affected
Pecked by the rain
In gained commotion
Grain after grain
I drained emotion
In proper fashion
Gentle motion
In passing rage
And raging passion
Unto the page

Kari16
New Member

since 1999-12-30

Posts 7
nebraska

1 posted 1999-12-31 11:47 AM

That is a very moving piece master i would like to hear more...
~Kari~

Midnight
Junior Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 28

2 posted 2000-01-01 11:59 AM

I really love the way this one flows.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 2000-01-01 03:59 PM

Thank you both!

Dean
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 120
Canada

4 posted 2000-01-06 09:51 PM

That is a dope poem man!! Keep up the good work man. I hope to see alot ****ing more from you!!!
Peace

Deano

"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

5 posted 2000-01-07 07:21 PM

Thanks dude!

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