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*~ What About Me?~*
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*~ What About Me?~* |
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BraTt Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 41Yakima, WA United States |
I want you, and only you. Can't you see that this is true? I'd give up my life, my eternity If you could only see, we were meant to be It's not fair, to live this way When I have to keep my emotions at bay. Everyone but you knows The way this feeling always grows. They all say, we should be a couple When I see you, my feelings always double But you chose her, over me I guess it's true, love isn't free. *~You are the star for which all evenings wait~* |
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BraTt Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 41Yakima, WA United States |
This poem was written for one of my ex boyfriends who I cared about so much. Him and his girlfriend just broke up, and to tell you the truth, I really do hope they get back together, because I am so over him now. I have my sweetheart Tanner. Love You Baby  *~You are the star for which all evenings wait~* |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Well, I think love is free, that it is the work to keep the relationship continuing that isnt. It takes a lot of work to keep a relationship. YOu can give your love out for free as much as you want. You can offer it up freely, as others can do to you. It just may not be accepted as easily as it is given up. I like the poem none the less and I lie your point of view on how you hope your Ex gets back together with his ex girlfriend. That is true friendship! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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BraTt Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 41Yakima, WA United States |
This poem was also posted just to see what people thought about it. Thanks *~You are the star for which all evenings wait~* |
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