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BraTt
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since 1999-10-25
Posts 41
Yakima, WA United States

0 posted 1999-12-30 02:57 PM



How could this be,
My angel from above,
No longer wants me.

He told me I could trust him,
He said he would be true,
But now it looks as if everything is just getting dim.

It's harder for me each day,
After all we've been through,
I wish he felt the same way.

I see no more meaning for my life,
I wish it would all just end,
Since I know there's no chance of me being his wife.

As I sit here and think that my heart will never mend,
With the knife in my hand,
It's true my life must end.




 *~You are the star for which all evenings wait~*

© Copyright 1999 Ashly - All Rights Reserved
BraTt
Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 41
Yakima, WA United States
1 posted 2000-01-01 12:59 PM


Please post replies for this poem.  Thanks
FallingStar
New Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 2

2 posted 2000-01-01 08:29 PM


I know this feeling a little "too" well. If this is true, i know it's hard, but put the knife down. No guy is worth your life no matter what they do to you. Anyways, good poem!
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
3 posted 2000-01-01 11:10 PM


good poem

and like she said... nobody in this entire world is worth taking your life for... i been there... and i'm glad i failed at my attempts... keep ya head up!

 Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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BraTt
Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 41
Yakima, WA United States
4 posted 2000-01-02 01:51 AM


Yeah, I realized that.  I am over that guy, and I have found someone that really cares for me.  He has proved that in many ways.  By always being there for me, and never giving up on me, and just always understanding my feelings, no matter how much people disagree with them.  I love him, and I know that I have found someone so special to me.  Thanks for the comments

 *~You are the star for which all evenings wait~*

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