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One Lonely Number
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One Lonely Number |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Such a lonely number, I think To say that you are the best The first above, far and beyond the others Such a high place, I wonder To fall from when they tell me you're tops Looking far below infinitely Such is the dreaded number one Who must face such a fearsom life Caught between zero, Who sobs bitterly at the nothingness Like a broken child And in the sight of two, Who will never cease to represent the most powerful The little thing called love Where its companionship will never step Such is the lonely number I fear When someone comes up and tells me "You're number one." "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Ryan Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 297Kansas |
Just like that song says, one is the loneliest number |
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PoeticDreams Junior Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 35Lindsay,Oklahoma US |
I really enjoyed reading this. I can relate to it. Good subject twrite about to. I like the ending. Well done. Looking forward to more poems. ~¤Always look to the sunrise and you'll never see the shadows¤~Anee Frank |
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Tina TT Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 45Victoria, Australia |
I never thought of it that way before....thanks  |
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