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One Night (please comment) thanks!
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One Night (please comment) thanks! |
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Marissa Junior Member
since 1999-12-25
Posts 20 |
Things surely changed after that one night. People told me you were just like the rest of them. I should've known they were right. You knew I'd never done anything like this with anyone before. If only then had I known that's all you wanted That-and nothing more. What I did to deserve this, I just can't see. I had been nothing but nice to you And you went and did this to me. You completely ignored me. You never bothered to call. You acted like I was a total stranger when you passed me in the hall. You aren't worth thinking about, But what you did is hard to forget. I don't need you or this pain. I really wish we'd never met. I once thought you were a great person And that being with you was something big, But after that one night I've learned you are nothing but a pig. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
There are many people in this world just after what they can take. Mark this one down to experience and learn from it. Don't let him have the power, move on and empower yourself.  |
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destiny502 Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57OH |
one of my close friends is in a situation much like this one. she is in a lot of pain over it. i dont know how to help her through it cuz i've never been in this situation before. thank god. but this is a really nice poem..keep it up. good luck!  |
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Leigh Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 20 |
All i can say is that is exactly how it feels. I went through something like that recently. It was one of the hardest things and the way you wrote this poem explains it to a T. Wonderful work! |
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