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NaTaLy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 1999-12-27 09:19 PM



look into my eyes,
what do you see?
reaching up to hold your hand
so needy
so alone
your touch brings me comfort.

where did you go?
why did you leave me!
you promised
but you left
and now im by myself
scared,
and when i cry,
my crys just echo back,
becouse there is no one willing to listen.

 n.m.

© Copyright 1999 nataly mor - All Rights Reserved
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-27 11:43 PM


This poem is able to be interpertted (sorry for spelling) many different ways, and this talent is what i love to read, i like this one, i'm suprised you havent gotten much responce...hopefully more people will come across this one! great job!

Ashley

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