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eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore

0 posted 1999-12-27 06:02 AM


I give u my all

If you've never ever been in love
or fallen for cupid's curse
I guess you'll never ever understand
or for a moment comprehend
the pain and sorrow my heart feels
the quiet nights and lonely meals.

If you've never ever felt her touch
or tasted her kiss as such
I guess you'll never know what it is
or crave for what u miss.

Have u ever seen her cry
the  feeling that makes u want to die?
Her tears are like those from my heart
pierced and bleeding by a dart.
Her pain and sorrow I cannot feel
but the feeling of helplessness can really kill.

If there is anything I can do
to help, cheer and comfort you
I want to share your burden and your sorrow
I want you to have something to look forward to tomorrow
I give you my shoulder to rest on and cry
I can't take the load but at least I will try
I give u care, love and concern
and a beacon of light to help you discern.
I give you support, before you fall down
I give you my all to wipe off that frown
I give you my hands to dry all your tears
I give you a hug to fight all your fears
I give you my life to make yours whole
I give you my heart and surrender my soul.

I give you all that, I don't expect return
but in my heart, the fire will always burn
I can only wish, and silently pray
that you will be mine, sometime someday.

© Copyright 1999 eagle - All Rights Reserved
Kiwi
Junior Member
since 1999-12-24
Posts 10

1 posted 1999-12-27 10:26 AM


You have me in awe right now!! That is such a wonderful poem....Who ever that girl is has to feel pretty darn lucky!! You are a great poet!!!!!
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 1999-12-27 02:57 PM


this was beautiful!!!!

i hope you do get her someday  

 Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Marissa
Junior Member
since 1999-12-25
Posts 20

3 posted 1999-12-27 09:37 PM


That was GREAT!  I hope you gave her this poem.  I know if someone were to say such sweet words to me, I'd definitely give them a chance.  Keep up the good work!
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
4 posted 1999-12-27 11:37 PM


And what a heart you hold, eagle...

Ashley

eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore
5 posted 1999-12-28 03:36 AM


Thanks for your support.  
Hope you are right  

mahi_mahi
New Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 5

6 posted 1999-12-29 07:14 AM


love the poem reminds me of a situation ive been in before keep up the good work
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