A stroke of light upon the snowy canvas...

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Teen Poetry #2

A stroke of light upon the snowy canvas...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-24 01:03 AM

A stroke of light upon the snowy canvas,
And morning slowly rises with a yawn.
Inside the room, a smell of burning candles
Is quickly mixed with freshness of the dawn.
Just hours ago, the stars were gazing in
Right through window’s icy, silver mesh,
And warmth was penetrating through the skin,
When spirits met outside their heated flesh.
Two lips were locked in an eternal kiss.
Their hungry eyes just seemed to bond them.
The ceiling shook from moans of bliss,
As ancient clay snowed down upon them.
And now this house, like a gallery of art,
Preserves that night, contains my heart.

I fell in love and kept on falling

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-12-24 01:11 AM

Simply beautiful...

*Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

Tina TT
Junior Member

since 1999-11-01

Posts 45
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 1999-12-24 03:08 AM

I was expecting a Christmas poem LOL but this was very good!

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-12-24 09:04 PM

Thank you both!

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