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peanogrl83
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 202


0 posted 1999-12-24 12:43 PM





Life goes by in a flashing instant,
Memories past are now cold and distant.
I blinked my eyes for just one second,
I missed your sign, when you beckoned.  
Now the moment is gone forever,
Your string of life the Fates did severe.

I close my eyes in hopes to forget,
The fire in me you once fiercely lit.
A tear drips down my frozen cheek,
Silent solace within I now seek.
I shed that tear for you, for me,
The obvious love you did not see.

I must move forth, plodding on,
In time, the pain might be gone.
There's no going back, no return,
My eyes must open, I must learn,
What is here now may not stay,
Take your chance, seize the day.



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eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore
1 posted 1999-12-24 09:14 AM


Well said peanogrl83.    

Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 1999-12-24 02:44 PM


great poem!
very expressive....

 Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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