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Its Not You Anymore....
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Its Not You Anymore.... |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
its not you that makes my heart skip beats its not you with whom other guys compete its not you that'z won my heart but its with you that i would like to part Its not your call i wait for its not your sight i adore its not your voice i live for but its you that i have lost hope for Its not you who caused these feelings its not you taking the beatings its not you who's is longing but it will be you who feels the stinging it'll be me to say i'm sorry its my burden that i shall carry I'll initiate the parting but its a new life we both'll be starting.... Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Sometimes it hurts to break apart from something...but u seem to have a good atitude towards it...great poem! Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
thank you |
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Marissa Junior Member
since 1999-12-25
Posts 20 |
I really liked this poem. Your outlook on separating yourself from someone is great! Good work! |
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