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Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

0 posted 1999-12-22 09:56 PM


<div align="Center"><font face="Script MT Bold, Arial, Verdana" color="#871f78" size="3">Feelings of deceit on my lips
Hopeless defeat captured in a kiss
Silent times full of guilt trips
Cuz certain needs were still missed
No one'z watching, so no one should know
Guilty conscience my only fatal foe
Lost a battle of will to say no
Mind thrown down to an ultimate low
No where to hide, now the truth's been shed
The dark painful path I must tread
Crying over broken hearts bled
Black soul lying on its death bed
Strength to get through this
Hope for one last wish
To forgive this weakness
and look to the heart of this....
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<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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[This message has been edited by Star Fairy 2 (edited 12-22-1999).]

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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-22 11:26 PM


This one is truely above all the others, star...keep posting!

Starboards

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 1999-12-27 03:03 PM


thank you starboards!!



 Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Marissa
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since 1999-12-25
Posts 20

3 posted 1999-12-27 09:18 PM


Great poem!  It holds a lot of meaning if you really read into it!
Good job!

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